V1 compared to the final version V9

above is the first version of my essay created on the 28th of April. As an essay goes, it is a decent start. it is more descriptive than analytical though, there are lots of details about who the artist is and what the song is about. it does not go into the impact the song had on the contest or the cultural impact of folk music as a whole. When I first started writing V1, I had trouble in a few different areas. My writings’ organisation and structure was one of my biggest faults. a reader could generally find it difficult to follow my thought process because my ideas frequently seemed disjointed and lacked an obvious development. My paragraphs frequently lacked the requisite power as well, failing to hook readers from the start and offer a solid feeling of finality. this essay also lacks a solid number of references and the ones it does have is incorrectly ordered. I have worked on this essay a lot since this version and can confidently say that I have made a substantial amount of progress and corrections. When I first started writing V1, I had trouble in a few different areas. My writings’ organisation and structure was one of my biggest faults. a reader could generally find it difficult to follow my thought process because my ideas frequently seemed disjointed and lacked an obvious development. My paragraphs frequently lacked the requisite power as well, failing to hook readers from the start and offer a solid feeling of finality.